Unformatted text preview: coverage of information and the commentary. I touched on the economic issue instead of just showing the issues regarding freed slaves. Furthermore, I forgot a little detail that was strong in proving how it wasn’t a revolution and how slavery did not change much. It just took another form; sharecropping was another way the freed slaves were bound with invisible chains by the wealthy landowners. This system placed them back to “slavery,” by keeping them in debt as they rented out land to be farmed on. To fix my little mistakes, I have to be clear when writing my thesis and making it more broad as to not limit my topic....
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- Spring '10
- Writing, couple mistakes, Metacognitive Writing