Unformatted text preview: with the usage of “although” to show give a little- take a lot. In the body paragraphs, there was uneven coverage with my analysis and historical ideas. I needed to stress the lack of income spending, which the Republican policies did not help with. Furthermore, for the Quota Acts, I should include how limiting immigration hurt the economy because immigrants could have provided another pool of people that can help spend money, in order to lessen the strain on the economy. Overall, the only thing that I needed to fix to get a higher grade was in the coverage....
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This note was uploaded on 10/04/2010 for the course WRIT 01546 taught by Professor Ghe during the Spring '10 term at École Normale Supérieure.
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