Unformatted text preview: writing grew stronger, I was able to focus in my topic, so I would have a much stronger essay. With Professor Howard’s help I was able to improve my essay so that they are interesting, as well in insightful. There are many ways that I can improve my writing as well, I need to strengthen my vocabulary in my writing, because sometimes, I end up writing the way usually speak, doing so it lessen the effect of the essay. I also need to improve on the fact I should be able to make my ideas a little more expressive in my writing as well is in the class itself. I have improved greatly in my writing with this course but I still have so much more to work on....
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- Spring '10
- Writing, Professor Howard, Harjit Kaur Instructor