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Unformatted text preview: grammatical and spelling errors. Donna tried to advise me on how to improve my paper, but I was confused as to what she was trying to say. I incorporated very little of her advice into my paper for that reason. I fixed my thesis statement, even though Aykil told me that she herself did not have one and didnt think it was necessary for this assignment. My citations were fine, so I didnt touch those, although I added a New York Times citation....
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This note was uploaded on 10/11/2010 for the course ENG ENG101 taught by Professor Smeerti during the Winter '08 term at University of North Carolina School of the Arts.
- Winter '08