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Unformatted text preview: me by the writepoint program. Also, that if I used sources throughout my paper that they need to be properly sited. I want to fix my introduction to become more appealing to my audience. Also I want the introduction to flow better with the rest of my paper and be the attention grabber I know it can be. I will be fixing all of my grammatical errors, no matter how small they may seem. I will watch for my comma usage, I know how fun they are to use but there is a time and place for them in my writing. After I have completed all that was given to me in feedback, I feel that my paper will be worthy of reading by any of my peers....
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This note was uploaded on 10/21/2010 for the course SCI 275 SCI 275 taught by Professor Lee during the Spring '09 term at University of Phoenix.
- Spring '09