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Unformatted text preview: The feedback I will incorporate is the information about APA citations and also fixing grammatical errors and removing the use of passive voice. I will also incorporate the feedback from my peer review about expanding in certain areas of subtopics. The feedback I will probably not incorporate is some of what was given in my peer review. The request of expanding on one topic that had absolutely nothing to do with my essay is one that I will likely not adhere. I will consider looking into a place for it, but if it decreases the strength of my paper, then I will not include this information....
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This note was uploaded on 10/24/2010 for the course COM 220 COM/220 taught by Professor Jackblack during the Spring '10 term at University of Phoenix.
- Spring '10