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Unformatted text preview: some minor grammatical and spelling errors. Christie tried to advise me on how to improve my paper, but I was confused as to what she was trying to convey, so I didnt really take her advice into account as much as I did Silvias. I fixed my thesis statement, even though Silvia told me that she herself did not have one and didnt think it was needed for this paper. My citations were fine, so I didnt edit them (although I added a Encyclopedia Brittanica citation)....
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This note was uploaded on 10/28/2010 for the course ENG 200901 taught by Professor Hodgkins during the Spring '09 term at UNC Greensboro.
- Spring '09