Peer Review Response 2

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Peer Review Response I felt that Silvia was effective at creating a peer review for my paper; her insight into ecstasy was the reason I felt more confident about the paper in general, and without her help I don’t think the paper would be anywhere near as good as it is now. Silvia also pointed out some fantastic sources that I could possibly use to talk about social attitudes in my paper. I took almost every suggestion she wrote down in her peer review of my paper and I also ironed out
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Unformatted text preview: some minor grammatical and spelling errors. Christie tried to advise me on how to improve my paper, but I was confused as to what she was trying to convey, so I didnt really take her advice into account as much as I did Silvias. I fixed my thesis statement, even though Silvia told me that she herself did not have one and didnt think it was needed for this paper. My citations were fine, so I didnt edit them (although I added a Encyclopedia Brittanica citation)....
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This note was uploaded on 10/28/2010 for the course ENG 200901 taught by Professor Hodgkins during the Spring '09 term at UNC Greensboro.

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