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Unformatted text preview: Final Assignment Paragraph 2. The author of President Obamas discussion with credit card companies explained his case very well and made his writing easy to understand. He provided several supporting factors in which I believe strongly upheld his topic sentence, and assisted in the flow of his entire paragraph. I noticed minor grammatically mistakes within his writing and toward the end he didnt genuinely conclude the way I had hoped despite such a strong buildup, instead I was left wanting to know how it all would end. I believe his choices of words were fairly decent and perhaps he could have expanded on a few words and utilized his vocabulary a bit better than he did. I would say that this paragraph was written fairly well and with some minor adjustments and perhaps a strong ending it could have been an excellent presentation, and something very interesting to read. Final Assignment WritePoint I believe that Writepoint is an excellent tool for most projects but it isnt always right about everything. I believe that Writepoint is an excellent tool for most projects but it isnt always right about everything....
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