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Unformatted text preview: laughing.” There was no subject but it was implied to be “we.” 3. In the fifth paragraph: “I did not think that he would not be able to handle the platonic part.” The author used a double negative in the sentence. The word “not” appeared twice in the same sentence. It may cause confusion. “Blessing and Disguise” 1. The narration in this piece was, in my opinion, excellent. There were a lot of dramatic parts which kept me interested in the piece. The short story in the beginning was depressing, then the next part totally changes mood to a happier time in her life. After that, it goes back to another sad story. If the second and third paragraphs would have been switched around, then it would stay too long in the negative parts. The contrast from different moods keeps the essay from focusing on the negative parts for a long time. Whether she meant it or not, the arrangement of paragraphs is pure genius....
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- Spring '10
- Short story, body paragraphs, main body paragraphs, Wonderwall.