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Unformatted text preview: -Question: what is the difference between would and will?-Answer: 3. What did the essay not do well? a. The conclusion is too long b. Some new info is added that was not in the intro c. Changes the subject too often i. Ex. Youth, young Americans, participants, individuals, young men and women, young adults, those who serve d. Some of the sentences are too long 4. What did the essay do well? a. Avoids the word I b. Starts off broad and then narrows in on the main topic....
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- Spring '10