JenniferJohnson296-CM233-03- unit 7- peerreview of AmandaDistler

JenniferJohnson296-CM233-03- unit 7- peerreview of AmandaDistler

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Peer Review 1 Running head: PEER REVIEW Peer Review Unit 7 Jennifer Johnson Kaplan University CM225-03 Susan Schmit September 12, 2010 1
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Jennifer’s Alarms Memo To: Amanda Distler From: Jennifer Johnson CC: Susan Schmitt Date: 07:01:33 Re: Recommendations for Improving Grow! Franchise the Business Report Thank you for the opportunity to review your rough draft on Grow! Franchise the Business Report. Your outline is a great start to a very good persuasive report with some revisions and added information will be even stronger. You have done a very good job of introducing some strong facts in the opening of this report. This information will open the eyes of the audience about the amount of money to be made by franchising. Your thesis statement is very clear and lends itself to have enough information to persuaded your audience why franchising will help the company. You have lots of information on each of your three key points in your outline. Based on your outline you should be able to transition to each of your key points nicely. I do have some recommendations
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JenniferJohnson296-CM233-03- unit 7- peerreview of AmandaDistler

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