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David's Peer Review - Thomas Molineaux Peer Reviewer David...

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Thomas Molineaux – Peer Reviewer David Culclasure – Writer ENGL 101 Fall 2010 Peer Review Workshop 1 st Complete Draft Short Essay 1 Answer each of the following questions in detail, using examples from the draft. You can cite examples by paragraph and line number, i.e. “In paragraph 3, sentence 2, you write….” 1. Has the author explained the introductory example in sufficient detail? Has the author connected it with two or three main points that will sustain the rest of the essay? What are they, and is there on that can be improved? -Yes the image is described well and a few main points he makes are the portrayal of a typical day of an archeologist and based on the picture, their lives are simple, easy, and enjoyable. 2. Has the author used signal phrases and verbs to differentiate between examples? Has the author used transitional phrases to distinguish between examples, establish contrasts, etc? Are there are any you would change? How?
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