Unformatted text preview: else.” Added to this could be that such is the reason that Lucy is unable to find him, in order to connect back to my thesis. Paragraph four has a pretty weak topic sentence, if at all. The line about the “ greater implications that The Digger which Lucy knew was not the truth,” would be more appropriate because it introduces the meaning of the thesis to be supporting by the text. Again, in paragraph five, the topic sentence could be a sentence featured later in the paragraph. I often introduced the paragraph with a quote and then explained the meaning, when it would be more logical to do this the other way around. “ Despite being both his wife and a Confidence, they [Lucy and The Digger] are divided by attitude and mindset.” could be a good topic sentence....
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- Spring '09
- Meaning of life, topic sentence, Lucy, weak topic sentence, appropriate topic sentence, word confidence