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Unformatted text preview: 4 Word Choice the Bradbury 5 Word not Needed new ~~~none~~~ 6 Awkward Sentence Bradbury uses detailed contrasting between opposite people in Fahrenheit 451 to express that technology can not control peoples lives. Bradbury contrasts opposite people in Fahrenheit 451 to express that technology can not control peoples lives. 7 Spelling Can not cannot...
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This note was uploaded on 11/17/2010 for the course ENL 003 taught by Professor Swinkin during the Fall '08 term at UC Davis.
- Fall '08
- Fahrenheit 451