Brainfuse Provider Response FormWelcome to the Writing Lab!Analysis and recommendations regarding specific parts of your paper are included in the tutor response form. A copy of your paper is also posted below this form, and it includes additional comments in brackets. If you do not see the tutor’s comments or a tutor’s review appears to be missing, please contact [email protected]. For specific questions about your paper, please resubmit through the Brainfuse Writing Lab.Thank you for choosing the Writing Lab. Best wishes with your revisions!Part 1 – OrganizationYour thesis reads as a list. Consider explaining how these traits as a bad ruler are problematic for Orgon’s character. You describe his abuse of power in one of your supporting paragraphs, so you need to show how this abuse makes him a bad ruler. Part 2 – Development If you include quotes from the play, be sure to explain how they contribute to your portrayal of Orgon’s poor characteristics. Include a few sentences of your own to help you show readers why or how Orgon is not a good ruler. Part 3 – Formatting and StyleReview your use of articles to see if you are using them to modify nouns. Your conclusion should function as a summarization of your earlier points.Useful Links:Organization & Development:For additional assistance with organization and development, please use the Brainfuse Essential Guides. You can view the guides by clicking on the links below:Organization Guide: Development Guide: Grammar, Usage, and Mechanics For additional assistance identifying and editing errors in grammar, usage, and mechanics, please use the Brainfuse Essential Grammar Guides. You can view the guide by clicking on this link below and logging in to Brainfuse:Grammar Guide: If you would like a review focused on your grammar, usage, and mechanics, please request a grammar only reviewin the comment box.
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Tartuffe, Moliere, Orgon, Orgon’s character