COM 220 Appendix G - Axia College Material Appendix G Peer...

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Axia College Material Appendix G Peer Review Checklist * What is the main point of this paper? That there are many different cultures throughout the country. What is the greatest strength of this paper? The paper is well organized, and talks about different aspects of different cultures. What material does not seem to fit the main point of the paper or does not seem to be appropriate for the audience? I do not understand why a recipe was included. Is this recipe suppose to be a visual aid? Has the author sufficiently addressed counterarguments? Explain your answer. I really do not see any counter arguments. This paper is strictly talking about different cultures. Where should the author add more details or examples? Explain your answer. I think that the author should add more example of wedding traditions as well as add more about the food. It is well organized but the paper does not flow together very well. Where is the writing unclear or
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COM 220 Appendix G - Axia College Material Appendix G Peer...

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