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Unformatted text preview: received the same feedback from my instructor as I did from my peer reviewer concerning the introduction of the paper. It was said to be unclear. With the suggestion, I can revise the introduction to be less unclear and make it tidier. The peer reviewer suggested I start with explaining the sentence versus opening straight with a sentence from a blog. My instructor informed me of errors I made with proper citation. She had suggested I review the APA format. She also noted that some of my statements were controversial and suggested that I make it tidier. I will most likely use all of the feedback that I was provided because I do not think any of the suggestions were unjust....
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This note was uploaded on 11/28/2010 for the course COM 220 COM/220 taught by Professor Jackblack during the Winter '10 term at University of Phoenix.
- Winter '10