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Unformatted text preview: sentence variety and rhythm. Although neither paragraphs had the best sentence variety. I think that the story about denied credit did not use correct sentence length. The story about wills used short and simple sentences, thus leaving out detailing words. It could have included a few more details about why everyone does not have a will along with including some facts regarding what the percentage of people do not have a will; versus those who do not have one....
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- Fall '10