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View Attempt 1 of 2 Title: Q18: Word Choice Started: October 28, 2010 11:55 PM Submitted: October 31, 2010 2:55 AM Time spent: 50:59:46 Current score: 0/10 = 0% This assessment is only partially graded. Graded Questions: 0/0.0 = 0% Ungraded Questions: --/10 Done 1. She went into the place. Rewrite the following sentence three times to make it more specific and interesting. (i.e. Who is she? How did she enter the building? What kind of building or room did she enter?) For example: Brumhilda swooped into the haunted house. She went into the place. Student Response: Brumhilda rushed into the amusement park. Brumhilda ran into the classroom. Brumhilda Climbed into the bedroom. Sample Correct Answer Claudia sauntered into the ballroom. Stephanie stormed up the walkway and threw open the door. Brumhilda flew into the haunted house on her broom. Score: (Not graded) 2. Witch story Below is a story that needs some work. Improve this story with better word choices and transitions. You can even change the story if you like. Have fun!
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This note was uploaded on 12/01/2010 for the course ENG 1007 taught by Professor Nataliecarter during the Spring '10 term at University of Nevada, Las Vegas.

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