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Jason Rawls Clair Whatley ENC1101-01 2.3.10 Process Memo Carpe Diem From the first draft to the second I mainly elaborating more on the stories I already had which was the roommate and the graduation story. I added a lot more detail so I could try and have the reader paint a picture and feel the same feeling as I was at that moment. Also after the first draft, everyone in my group wrote their stories on a more serious note and I notice theirs was a lot more personal stories than mine. They had a lot of family related stories and they talked about deeper feelings, my stories are completely opposite. I’m not a very personal person and I don’t like to talk about sad memories of my life. And that’s how I set up my paper. My paper is manly composed of stories that are on a happier joking type level. In the second draft I added more humorous stories. The group like how I had humor in my stories so in the 2 nd draft I also added my missing fish which was basically a humor story and so was the animal cop story. But
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