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Unformatted text preview: and tough love tactics. Do not use a comma between compound elements that are not independent clauses (Bedford 33a). Ask anyone- This should not end with a question mark. It should end with a period. Ask anyone . Do not use a question mark after an indirect quotation (Bedford38b). I got- I need to switch got with have. All I have to say is that Hoosiers is better than Remember the Titans because Hoosiers is more of the David Goliath type story. Got is unnecessary and awkward in such constructions (Bedford 850)....
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This note was uploaded on 12/15/2010 for the course WRIT 100 taught by Professor Lambinus during the Spring '08 term at Moravian.
- Spring '08