Unformatted text preview: and tough love tactics. Do not use a comma between compound elements that are not independent clauses (Bedford 33a). Ask anyone- This should not end with a question mark. It should end with a period. Ask anyone . Do not use a question mark after an indirect quotation (Bedford38b). I got- I need to switch got with have. All I have to say is that Hoosiers is better than Remember the Titans because Hoosiers is more of the David Goliath type story. Got is unnecessary and awkward in such constructions (Bedford 850)....
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- Writing, Ed Matta, Ed Matta Writ, Surface Error Corrections