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Unformatted text preview: person I compared myself to was an outcast. I thought this project was a good way to find more out about someone through their given, readymade, and constructed identities. To improve on this paper I would include a better introduction instead of just jumping into the paper. Overall, I thought my paper had its share of strengths and weaknesses. I need to fix some surface errors and improve on a better beginning and conclusion. Other than that I think I did a fine job....
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This note was uploaded on 12/15/2010 for the course WRIT 100 taught by Professor Lambinus during the Spring '08 term at Moravian.
- Spring '08