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Unformatted text preview: Explain how you will incorporate the feedback into your paper. I changed my second person references and removed my written numbers. How does this feedback improve your expository essay? I think it made it more acceptable to a larger audience. My paper no longer is speaking to one person but, includes everyone now. What feedback did you choose not to include? Explain your answers. There was only one spot where I chose not to include some of the advice I received. It was at a certain point where I tried to rewrite my sentence but, it made no sense any other way so I chose to leave it be as it was referring to second person and first or third just didnt make sense....
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This note was uploaded on 01/11/2011 for the course COM 140 taught by Professor Heeb during the Spring '08 term at University of Phoenix.
- Spring '08