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Unformatted text preview: ►Explain how you will incorporate the feedback into your paper. I changed my second person references and removed my written numbers. ►How does this feedback improve your expository essay? I think it made it more acceptable to a larger audience. My paper no longer is speaking to one person but, includes everyone now. ►What feedback did you choose not to include? Explain your answers. There was only one spot where I chose not to include some of the advice I received. It was at a certain point where I tried to rewrite my sentence but, it made no sense any other way so I chose to leave it be as it was referring to second person and first or third just didn’t make sense....
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- Spring '08
- Writing, Center for Writing Excellence, ►What feedback