Week 7 CheckPoint_Introductions and Conclusions Writepoint

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Eating Healthy 1 Welcome to WritePoint, the automated review system that recognizes errors most commonly made by university students in academic essays. The system embeds comments into your paper and suggests possible changes in grammar and style. Please evaluate each comment carefully to ensure that the suggested change is appropriate for your paper, but remember that your instructor's preferences for style and format prevail. You will also need to review your own citations and references since WritePoint capability in this area is limited. Thank you for using WritePoint. [NOTE: WritePoint comments are computer-generated writing and grammar suggestions inviting the consideration and analysis of the writer, not infallible statements of right/wrong, and they should not be used as grading elements. Also, at present, WritePoint cannot detect quotations or block-quotes, so comments in those areas should be ignored.] Running head: Eating Healthy
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Eating Healthy 2 Week 6 [Write out numbers under 10] Assignment: Body Paragraphs Presented in Partial Fulfillment Of the Requirements for the Class COM 150 – EFFECTIVE ESSAY WRITING INSTRUCTOR PATRICIA SANKER by Jim Youngblood 11 April 2010
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Eating Healthy 3 Abstract In this paper you [Word choice. In academic writing, second person (you and your) should be replaced with a third person pronoun (he, she, it, one, and they). ] [Eliminate second person (you, your) in academic documents and avoid addressing the reader directly. Use third-person pronouns (he, she, it, they)] will learn some of the benefits of eating healthy. How that by monitoring your [Do not use second person in academic writing.] [second person] caloric intake, controlling portion size and regular exercise can help lower overall [Wordiness: unless meaning denim work clothes, "overall" is general and vague and contributes little to the sentence] healthcare [The preferred spelling is two words: health care] costs. Thesis Statement Even though not everyone is the same, eating healthy and exercising can result in lower healthcare costs for healthy eaters and people who invest their [Check pronoun agreement--if "their" refers to "everyone" (or a singular subject), it should be singular, too (his or her)] fitness.
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Eating Healthy 4 Eating Healthy Eating Healthy? We all [Try to eliminate "all" or "all of"; most often the meaning is the same without these words] have tried to eat healthy for one reason or another, what if I told you [Do not use second person in academic writing.] [second person] that by eating healthy you [Do not use second person in academic writing.] [second person] could save significant amounts of money just by changing the way you [Do not use second person in academic writing.] [second person] eat and exercising, not to mention the health benefits. Simply by maintaining a healthy caloric intake and exercising proper portion control you [Do not use second person in academic writing.] can significantly reduce your [Do not use second person
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This note was uploaded on 01/11/2011 for the course COM 150 taught by Professor Johannahvanatta during the Spring '08 term at University of Phoenix.

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