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From+Jared_s+clarity - Compare these two paragraphs. Which...

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Compare these two paragraphs. Which one is more readable? Why? a. Scientists have raised some astonishing questions about the nature of the universe by exploring black holes in space. A black hole is created by the collapse of a dead star into a point perhaps no larger than a marble. So much matter compressed into so little volume changes the fabric of space around it in puzzling ways. b. Scientists have raised some astonishing questions about the nature of the universe by exploring black holes in space. The collapse of a dead star into a point perhaps no larger than a marble creates a black hole. So much matter compressed into so little volume changes the fabric of space around it in puzzling ways. Compare these two paragraphs. Which one is more readable? Why? a. The first democratic governments arose in a few Greek city-states during the sixth and fifth centuries B.C. Either enemies from without or, more frequently, internal revolutions of the wealthy few overthrew these governments; they didn't last long. Although they
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This note was uploaded on 01/18/2011 for the course UWP 104A taught by Professor Dragona during the Spring '10 term at UC Davis.

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