ENG101 Argument 1 Rough Draft Changes Outline

ENG101 Argument 1 - confused about this part though… • I am not really sure what is going on in the poster with the guitars and things So I was

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Fountain 1 George Fountain III Lindsay Lawley Rerecich ENG101; Section 5: Rhetoric and Composition February 23, 2010 Rough Draft Argument Changes Outline I. Introduction: Add addition sentence to signify main refutation point about Vietnam poster. II. Narration of Navy Poster: Do NOT start with a question for this beginning paragraph (maybe save it for later in argument/body paragraphs?). Adjust some of the verbs, so they ado not sound so repetitive later in the paper Add more detail (specifically about the eyes of the subjects, so that the reader can visualize the exact situation without even seeing the poster III. Narration of Vietnam Poster: Beginning sentence/statement is too vague (add more detail about specific things or items within the poster’s image) - kind of
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Unformatted text preview: confused about this part though… • I am not really sure what is going on in the poster, with the guitars and things? So I was not sure how to mention this part into the overall description of the poster. IV. Confirmation: Make ending of the first paragraph flow better, maybe change around the last sentence to the second or third confirmation paragraph • Add in another sentence or two to beef up second paragraph Fountain 2 • Adjust fragment statement to connect to the following point the “connection with audience” V. Refutation: Be more specific when mentioning different posters here, so that the reader is not left in confusion VI. Conclusion: Add that addition sentence about refutation (as added into introduction)....
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This note was uploaded on 01/22/2011 for the course ENG 101 taught by Professor Stegman during the Spring '09 term at Catholic University of America.

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ENG101 Argument 1 - confused about this part though… • I am not really sure what is going on in the poster with the guitars and things So I was

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