Week three assignment paragraph

Week three assignment paragraph - second topic sentence,...

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I have decided to sequence my outline as I did because I truly believe that renting is like throwing away your money and I wanted “renting is like throwing away your money” to be what catches my reader or audiences attention. I have tried two other directions and it seems that at this point starting with this topic sentence is the better option. Then I put the second topic sentence “Renting a home is a poor financial decision because your monthly housing expenses are not contributing to build up equity.” I used this as my
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Unformatted text preview: second topic sentence, because it elaborates more on why renting is like throwing away your money but yet it is a different topic sentence. The last topic sentence I used is The most important reason Renting is like throwing away your money is because it is more cost effective in the long run to own your own home. I used this topic sentence last because it brings the other two topic sentences together with this paragraph, and it leads well to the final sentence, or the conclusion of the essay....
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