Reflection all sentences

Reflection all sentences - Reflection 1 Ive learned several...

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Reflection 1. I’ve learned several things there I had made a lot of friends. They helped me on my working. Change: I learned several things there and made a lot of friends, who helped me a lot with my work. Reason: Double subject available a subject to replace, “they” can be instead of “who” to make this sentence more clearly. 2. Between the sentences “and they listened to my problems about my working.” And “My parents thought I was grown up …” Add: All these things helped me understand communication is very important in our lives and we have to communicate each other when we found we have any problems. I also found that I could face the problem and looked for some ways to solve them. Reason: I want to show more about how the relationship helped me. 3. Such as we’ve never communicated with the persons like customers, and we had to talk with them kindly. Change: For instance, we’ve never communicated with the persons like customers, and we had to talk with them kindly. Reason: I think “for instance” is better than “such as”, because I learned this phrase for new. 4. But there’re some people that they didn’t think it was necessary for them to cooperate with us and … Change: But there were some people who didn’t think it was necessary for them to
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This note was uploaded on 01/31/2011 for the course ENGLISH 150 taught by Professor White during the Fall '09 term at Iowa State.

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Reflection all sentences - Reflection 1 Ive learned several...

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