Unformatted text preview: ends off with him seeing her walking down the hall of this institute he is being kept in, presumable her ghost or him envisioning her, and it is assumed that he has killed her also. The story was true and sounded real like it could have been written by a truly disturbed man or killer. It could have been a little bit longer, but it was a good read nonetheless. Although it lacked character and dialogue, I think the purpose of it was to bring us inside the narrator's head and keep us there rather than showing us anything going on outside his head. I thought this story was very well written, and I look forward to reading a longer or another piece. Thanks, Erica Broome...
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- Fall '07
- Point Of View, Thought, First-person narrative, A Little Bit Longer, Erica Broome, truly disturbed man