Unformatted text preview: his lack of motivation. He then is at a party and hears about some freshman girl who killed herself the other week because she got back her grades and just couldn't handle it. The story ends with him leaving the party and deciding that he needs to get out of that school because wherever he goes he is sure he will end up better there than if he stays in school. This story is a series of episodes which help the reader understand that the narrator is depressed and is unhappy with his life. The other characters are trivial, and it seems to be a story just about him and his thoughts. There is a lack of setting description as well as background information about the main character. This was a good piece, but it could definitely use some work. Thanks, Erica Broome...
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- Fall '07
- Sexual intercourse, Vagina, Erica Broome, seemingly prestigious university