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Unformatted text preview: he does have the power to give him this knowledge, it is not for him or any other human being to possess. The man then wakes up in his bed covered in a cold sweat. He realizes that it was just a dream, and he wonders where it came from. This story seems too unoriginal and too manufactured. We have seen this plot in almost every movie and in millions of books. There was hardly any creative aspect to it, and although we are told the story from a first person point of view, we have no clue who our main character is and have no information on him. Additionally, there were a few spelling and grammatical mistakes that definitely need to be fixed. I would say this story is a good start, but it needs some more work and more of a character structure as well as a plot structure. Thanks, Erica Broome...
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- Fall '07