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Unformatted text preview: is about the narrator's AP Calculus teacher publicly announcing that she thought she was too stupid to take AP Calculus, and the narrator describes how upset she was upon hearing this. The third section of the story is about how the narrator, Devra, handed in her paper late and got penalized for it. She mentions she got a % on her AP exam, and then she ends off the story discussing how she dyed her hair brown in her second year of college, and although her hair may be a different color, she is sill who she is. This story needs a lot of work. It was very confusing and does not have much of a storyline. Maybe writing about something a little more interesting or more appealing to the reader would work better. Thanks, Erica Broome...
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- Fall '07
- Best Friends, Erica Broome, Devra, AP Calculus teacher