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Unformatted text preview: to work with the counselor. Although we are aware that this is a small excerpt from a longer story, I still feel as if it lacks substance. The dialogue is pretty good, but the story did not do such a great job of keeping my attention. Maybe with an added twist or an unexpected character this story might have a little more creativity. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks, Erica Broome...
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This note was uploaded on 02/08/2011 for the course ENGL 243 taught by Professor Collier during the Fall '07 term at Maryland.
- Fall '07