Unformatted text preview: girl runs through the narrator’s “spirit”, and she retreats back into the forest to return to her serenity of death. This story was enjoyable and somewhat mystic and fantastical. It definitely needed some clarification and more of a plot. I was confused as to the purpose of the story and the purpose of any of the characters. It is definitely a good start, but your next piece should perhaps focus on the story rather than the narrator’s thoughts. Good start though. I enjoyed the read. Thanks, Erica Broome...
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- Fall '07
- English-language films, Narratology, Erica Broome