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Unformatted text preview: discovers them he is ashamed of who he is and is determined not to let them win. He decides to make something of his misfortune, of his being an experiment. He decided to make something of his life. The story ends off with his dog talking to him, leaving us to question whether the dog was a product of the genetics lab as well. This story was a bit lengthy and a bit repetitive. It could have used a twist or something different in Oscar's life, like a love interest or a fellow monster. It was well developed, it just needs some work in helping to keep the readers interest throughout the entire piece. Thanks, Erica Broome...
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- Fall '07