Erica Sturdavant_Revision

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Running head: REVISION 1 Revision Erica Sturdavant COM156 September 25, 2010 Christine Belledin
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REVISION 2 Revision The first thing that I would do to revise Andy Axia’s paper would be to use APA formatting or use a program such as Riverpoint Writer. This program will set up the paper in the proper format such as double spacing, a title page that includes the writer’s name, the title, due date, course number, and the instructor name with running headers and page numbers. It will also use the correct font size and type that is required for APA writing styles. The correct font size is either 10 or 12 point font in Arial or Times New Roman. The second thing that I would do to revise Andy Axia’s paper would be to omit the section about Wikipedia’s review of the movie. I would choose to do this because Wikipedia cannot be considered a credible site. I also think that Andy Axia should have rewritten the section in his own words rather than using a direct quote. Using the direct quote from Wikipedia can be considered plagiarism because it was
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This note was uploaded on 02/17/2011 for the course COM 156 taught by Professor Hampton during the Spring '10 term at University of Phoenix.

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