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Unformatted text preview: such as the members of PHPSA to show connectivity. One comma splice No necessary pause or change of thought Remove comma. Expand “I” Need to include other people I talk about in essay. Include other people stated within essay....
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This note was uploaded on 02/19/2011 for the course ENGLISH 106 taught by Professor Hibble during the Fall '10 term at S.F. State.
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