Esaay Dialogue 3

Esaay Dialogue 3 - such as the members of PHPSA to show...

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Tanisha Saini English 106.36 Essay 3 Dialogue Comment/ Mark Reason How to Fix Balance you and larger group of students. Addressed myself as the main character too much and needed to include larger group such as the PHPSA group. When discussing points that effect me add whole group
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Unformatted text preview: such as the members of PHPSA to show connectivity. One comma splice No necessary pause or change of thought Remove comma. Expand “I” Need to include other people I talk about in essay. Include other people stated within essay....
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This note was uploaded on 02/19/2011 for the course ENGLISH 106 taught by Professor Hibble during the Fall '10 term at S.F. State.

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