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Essay 1 self check 2 - Self Check: Essay 1 Revision Tanisha...

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Self Check: Essay 1 Revision Tanisha Saini English 106.36 GLOBAL 1. My introduction starts with a very broad hook that should make the reader think “What is she talking about” at first and want to read on. It becomes very specific very fast to not leave the reader confused. 2. My thesis does not include “I think…” or anything related to that. My points are very clear. College can be a successful experience by creating bonds with professors, asking questions in class, and taking advantage of tutoring resources. Ultimately, if none of these are accomplished life after college can be strenuous. 3. Each topic sentence is clear and states an opinion that is supported strongly throughout the paragraphs. 4. Each topic sentence holds one theme together and that is college is close to limitless; if one method does not work there are many other methods that students can utilize to ensure their college experience is superb. Therefore, each topic
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