Essay Dialogue 1 - connect ideas well Change to To ing or...

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Tanisha Saini English 106.36 Essay Dialogue Comment/Mark Reason How to Fix No comma ever between the subject and verb This is a comma splice and no pause between the two. Take out comma Use correct transition words To create a better flow and connect ideas more appropriately Add words such as overall, as a result, ultimately, etc. Wrong verbal phrase (D.C) Creates a fragment when used wrong, and does not
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Unformatted text preview: connect ideas well. Change to: To, ing-, or –ed Misuse of Syntax/ Repetition of words Structured in an odd way. Does not get point across and loses point of sentence. Read aloud to see how sentence lacks clarity. Dangling modifier Not specific, does not explain who or what. Sentence is not clear. Change or add words to be more specific....
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