Unformatted text preview: strong show verb. Cut out “seem” and “appear” Weakens argument because I should be sure of my self Eliminate use of “seem” and “appear.” Consistency of Capitalization Forgot to Capitalize all Health Centers in the essay. Capitalize all the Health Centers...
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This note was uploaded on 02/19/2011 for the course ENGLISH 106 taught by Professor Hibble during the Fall '10 term at S.F. State.
- Fall '10