Essay Dialogue 2

Essay Dialogue 2 - strong show verb Cut out “seem” and...

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Tanisha Saini Essay Dialog 2 Comment/ Mark Reason How to Fix Use good clear verbs Weakens point of argument and can be made stronger with use of a stronger verb to SHOW. Add a strong show verb. Limit “To Be” Verbs Weakens point of argument and can be made stronger with use of a stronger verb to SHOW. Replace to be verbs with a
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Unformatted text preview: strong show verb. Cut out “seem” and “appear” Weakens argument because I should be sure of my self Eliminate use of “seem” and “appear.” Consistency of Capitalization Forgot to Capitalize all Health Centers in the essay. Capitalize all the Health Centers...
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This note was uploaded on 02/19/2011 for the course ENGLISH 106 taught by Professor Hibble during the Fall '10 term at S.F. State.

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