Self Check Essay 2

Self Check Essay 2 - Self Check Tanisha Saini English...

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Self Check Tanisha Saini English 106.36 GLOBAL 1. My hook I feel grips the reader and the story begins a bit slow yet dramatic and in a gripping way. The hook also alludes to the whole purpose of the essay and acts as an underlying thesis. The introduction to my essay is funnel shaped and becomes very specific at the end by my statement thesis. 2. My thesis is the last line of my introduction and it is very specific and also persuasive. My thesis does not include my opinion in the form of “I think or I believe.” 3. Some of the very first topic sentences in my essay work better as transitions, instead of legit topic sentences to create flow and tell the story in a more clear and concise way. I do however; add in the topic sentence following immediately after. 4. Like stated above in point 3. I My first sentence does clearly touch on the previous point/paragraph. I used many transitional adverbs to create flow as well and connect the PIE. 5.
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