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Unformatted text preview: wouldve said My Aunt Martha went to a lawyer to get a will while I did mine online. As in paragraph five, the first sentence and last sentence is repeated, which I think could have been avoided, and in the paragraph it says needs to go the doctor, which needs to be changed to needs to go to the doctor. Also in paragraph five, I think the or something couldve been left out and a few of those sentences couldve been combined as well....
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- Spring '10