enc1102 journal 7 - Thisweek,you'.Oneofthe ,asdescribedhere...

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This week, you're going to begin preparing your final draft by revising and expanding. One of the  methods we went over is the paramedic method, as described here:  http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/635/01/ Your journal this week is to take a paragraph from your paper and edit it, using the suggestions  outlined in the paramedic method. Post BOTH paragraphs, the before and after. Then, write 3-5  sentences that summarize how much the paragraph changed and if you think it changed for the  better or worst. No word count, but I expect a big paragraph (at least 7+ sentences). Before Anthony, who was only twenty years old at the time, received a DUI while driving home from a bar about four years ago. After a long night of drinking heavily, he decided to leave from the bar earlier than his friends did and without letting them know.
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enc1102 journal 7 - Thisweek,you'.Oneofthe ,asdescribedhere...

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