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Unformatted text preview: sentences mostly into past tense and also punctuation. Moreover, I have a lot of awkwardness sentence because in this paper we have to write details. I also wrote many words that actually is not needed or understood by the reader. I choose to do the revision because I thought my essay is had lots of grammar mistake and wordiness. I feel my first essay-which was three pages- It was really hard for me, however I could make it. I learned to focus on grammar and do brain storming if I don’t have ideas. Furthermore, I will go to tutor if I need help, so I always in the right track....
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This note was uploaded on 03/07/2011 for the course ENG 101 taught by Professor Heinlein during the Spring '11 term at Indiana Northwest.
- Spring '11