Incorporating feedback

Incorporating feedback - which points should be revised and...

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Incorporating feedback Tiffany Altvater Eng 101
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I have received lots of informative and helpful feedback that I will be incorporating into my essay. I think the most helpful critique came from the peer review because this was more of a review of how the essay comes across to an unfamiliar reader, with this exercise I was able to find out that there are a few rough transitions that I will be re-working, and this exercise also gave me confidence that with a little revising I may actually be able to write an interesting an convincing essay. My teacher has always given great feedback, like which points stand out
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Unformatted text preview: which points should be revised and most of all this is the person who helped me bring all of the parts of my essay together through her advice. The center for writing excellence gave me many useful grammar suggestions that I will be using although I will not be using all of the suggestions made by the writing reviewer because they are not all pertinent. I think with all of the feedback that I have received I will be able to revise my essay into a paper that is easy and interesting to read....
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This note was uploaded on 03/08/2011 for the course MTE 520 taught by Professor Jones during the Spring '11 term at University of Phoenix.

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