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Unformatted text preview: personally. I also needed help with the structure of my essay. I felt like everything was all over the place and I didnt know how to fix it. I really feel that poverty is an important issue and I wanted to have the audience feel what Im feeling. I would really appreciate if the reader could see if it really affected him and if it didnt, I think I should add more emotion to the essay and make it feel real....
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- Fall '09