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Unformatted text preview: Ashley Hutson March 1, 2011 Biology 1103 Lab Ms. Freeman The Match of the Century (Peer Review) I want to first start by saying that the Match of the Century was an overall good paper. I feel like you incorporated all of the points that were asked of the first draft in the rubric. There are some things that I do have to critique. First this paper was written kind of like an animation. What I mean by this is the way things were written with it seeming like amylase and carb cutter were in a boxing ring gave me a very animated image in my mind as I read. This was a good thing to do but I feel like it was also a weakness. We were suppose to be writing an article that could go in the Red and Black, and although the Red and Black does have their humorous articles at times, they are usually more serious and informative. This first draft was informative but it was a little to playful in my opinion for the Red and Black. I think that being in college when we pick up a newspaper we enjoy reading articles that and Black....
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