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Unformatted text preview: monotonous. I do not consider myself a very skilled writer, but I am convinced that I would do a better job than Sheba Khan at writing this article. I, unlike her, would use a wider selection of vocabulary. The most complex word used by Khan in this article is “affluent”. I understand that simplicity is sometimes a very necessary component towards writing, but this article is not the case. This student is a senior at New Jersey Institute of Technology, and although writing skills are not very needed in order to attend there, there still must be some sort of requirement. In my opinion, the writing skills applied in this article is to be compared with that of a sixth grader. The student body at New Jersey Institute of Technology should feel embarrassed to have such low quality of writing represent it’s school and education. This sub-par piece of literature has proved to be not only unworthy for publication in The Vector, But also unworthy to be shown to the public....
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This note was uploaded on 03/21/2011 for the course PHYS 111A taught by Professor Universal during the Fall '10 term at NJIT.
- Fall '10