This preview shows pages 1–2. Sign up to view the full content.
This preview has intentionally blurred sections. Sign up to view the full version.View Full Document
Unformatted text preview: attention for this. In her presentation, the organization is clear enough for the audience to perceive the presenter’s plan. Her voice is appropriate and her pronunciation is clear. Her speaking speed is fine. He used some visual aids to help the audiences to understand it, such as pictures of Power Point. However, I also have some advice for her. There are three parts which she could increase. The first one is “eye contact” because I feel she read a lot during her speech. The second one is “avoided nervous mannerisms”. I could feel that she was a little nervous at the beginning. If she can improve these aspects, I think she will have a great progress in her speech. In conclusion, this is a successful academic speech. Though the presenter has a little defect, I got some important knowledge about the reason of earthquake in China....
View Full Document
This note was uploaded on 03/23/2011 for the course ENGL 1102 taught by Professor Don· during the Spring '11 term at Prince George's Community College, Largo.
- Spring '11