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Revision and Editing Symbols Paragraph and Essay Form intro Provide an introduction thesis A thesis is needed or a more focused or specifically worded thesis is needed topic sentence? A topic sentence is needed announcing your claim , or a more focused or specifically worded topic sentence is needed unity? I can’t see how these sentences support your topic sentence or I can’t see how this paragraph supports your thesis coh? I can’t see how these sentences are connected or I can’t see how these paragraphs are connected. dev Paragraph or essay development is needed rep Avoid repetition of ideas red Avoid redundancy condense Condense these sentences into a fewer number; you could say the same thing in less space trans Transitional word, phrase or sentence, needed contradict This contradicts what you say elsewhere Accurate? Does evidence from the text or an outside source support this claim? Sense?
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This note was uploaded on 03/27/2011 for the course IH 0952 taught by Professor Zhuraw during the Spring '11 term at Temple.

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